1. says

    the way you use the word “knitted” is perfect in this poem.

    calvin and i love in the countryside. our night sky is a milky ribbon of shooting light.

    i stand in awe each evening. i look out my door and find it so special that you and i are looking at the same sky.

  2. says

    what Claire said.

    and it reminds me of the waterfall part of the memorial site at Ground Zero in NYC. They were discussing it today, how all the water will stream endlessly from above to below , like a river of memories, a river of birth and living and dying but not ending. Continual. Continuing.

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